We had some friends visiting from out-of-town, and as often happens when you live outside of Washington, D.C., we ended up at a museum. We chose the Smithsonian American Art Museum (Off the Mall! We found parking!), where a collection of works by Norman Rockwell was on display.
Norman Rockwell was probably the first artist I discovered as a kid. My parents had a huge hardcover album of his artwork, and I remember looking at the pictures until the dust jacket was in tatters. It may be fashionable for some to shun Rockwell as too commercial and unchallenging, but all the same, I thought there were some valuable lessons for writers, especially children’s book writers, therein.
First, it should be noted that the works on display were not just a random collection, but pieces from the collections of Steven Spielberg and George Lucas. What do two of the most famous filmmakers of our time have to do with Norman Rockwell? As we found out in a short film accompanying the exhibit, PLENTY. Both Spielberg and Lucas spoke movingly of admiring Rockwell’s Saturday Evening Post covers from an early age, and his ability to instantly convey a story in a visual way. My favorite example of this was a Post cover called “The Flirts,” which had two older truck drivers glancing down admiringly at a pretty blonde girl in the car next to them. To quote Spielberg’s comment on the painting, ” ‘the men’s glances are totally innocent, completely moral,’ and ‘at the same time, just naughty enough’ that you know these guys aren’t ‘total squares.’” One of the men is plucking a daisy. And my favorite detail is the reflection on the back of the sideview mirror – the light has changed to green, but the drivers obviously have no intention of driving any time soon.
So lesson one: the bones of the story should be apparent, at least by the tensions in the story. You can count them here: men vs. women, old vs. young, the presence of unattainable beauty. Another great one is called “Boy on High Dive,” with a young man peering fretfully over the edge of a 20 foot high dive. What he wants most is what scares him.
Spielberg and Lucas also talked about characters, how Rockwell “cast” his paintings, much like a director casts a film. No one is chosen at random – everyone in the picture has a function and a particular ability to convey an emotion or idea. Lesson two: no “clutter” characters. Make sure your story is not littered with characters who are just crowding out your ideas.
Finally, the filmmakers pointed out that Rockwell had an uncanny ability to convey the history of each subject in an instant: the coatcheck girl who longs for a better life or the airman who is easing back to civilian life. You can tell by their expressions and the tiniest details that Rockwell inserts into his pictures. Look at “Back to Civvies,” and you can catch all the details of the man’s before and after lives. A high school pennant and a girl’s photograph are juxtaposed with the picture of an airplane and a detailed military jacket draped over a chair. They’re not there for you to notice first – you’ll first look at the man looking at himself in the mirror – but the details are there for you to discover. Likewise, characters in stories develop depth and interest through the small details of their lives, as well as the large ones. (Lesson three, for those you keeping score at home.)
I love finding inspiration for better writing in unexpected places. Where have you found your inspiration?
